Correct my English writing / with presents for piano funs.?
Could you correct my English into natural one? This JE translation of introducing sentence was asked by asker.
川のささやき – 辻井伸行
目が不自由な彼が子どもの頃、父親に隅田川に
連れて行ってもらった時の記憶を頼りに作った曲。
Whispers of a river (Nobuyuki Tsujii).
This tune was made by the visually handicapped pianist, recalling his memories of childhood when his father took him to the Sumida River.
Apart from my question, presents are;
Whispers of a river：
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yBcGAt3pSNY
Tujii won the 13th Van Cliburn only a few days ago.
http://minnie111.blog40.fc2.com/blog-entry-1634.html#more
As for absolute participial construction:
Should I correct it into “ , he recalling his …”?
川のささやき – 辻井伸行
目が不自由な彼が子どもの頃、父親に隅田川に
連れて行ってもらった時の記憶を頼りに作った曲。
Whispers of a river (Nobuyuki Tsujii).
This tune was made by the blind pianist,Nobuyuki Tsuji, recalling his memories of childhood when his father took him to the Sumida River.
(Cliburn)Tchaikovsky Piano Concerto No.1 Mvt I-1
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