french speakers! i need some help?
can someone please correct my french speech, its big part of my grade thank you so much!.
and im asking for actual french speakers no freetranslation.com or computer translatores. thank you.
its a speech about my dreamhouse
and could someone please tell me how to say dreamhouse in french or something close to it. thank you
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I’d bet no one has responded yet because 1) you admit it’s for a large part of your grade and thus should reflect your level of French and 2) it’s kind of messed up, dude! I understand, but that’s because I’m used to how English speakers translate French.
I’m not going to write it out for you and make it that easy. I also want to warn you that I’m a French teacher, not a native speaker. What I’m giving you is what a non-native french student would be capable of writing, not what a native speaker would write (because your teacher would definitely know you didn’t write it).
What level French are you in? You’re using the conditional and future a lot. Have you learned those tenses? If not, it’s a dead give-away that you used a transator site or got help. My impression is that you looked up a lot of the vocab in a dictionary. When you do that, it’s best to them check your work by looking up the French word in the other half of the dictionary and seeing what the English translation is. Also read the whole definition (all the choices) rather than just using the first word listed.
OK. Here we go.
La maison de mes reves = the house of my dreams
chaud = hot (chauffer = the verb to warm/heat)
what is aplace? place is not a cognate. Use « où » (where)
get rid of était
il y a can’t be in the present tense – use the conditional
period after bruit.
2 stories = une maison à deux étages (histoire is the kind of story you tell!)
leave out « dans le devant » it’s bad French & unnecessary
consider using l’entrée (the entrance) rather than les étapes, which are steps in a process (step 1, step 2…)
verrait is not conjugated to agree with vous . I’d use the future since you used the present earlier in that sentence.
« gardez la promenade » – do you mean keep on walking? use « continuez a vous promener »
le passé means the past as in not the present / future. Use the verb « passer » = to go past
trois (spelling)
chacune = each one (f)
why « admirablement »?
le rez-de-chaussée = the ground floor in French. The floor of a room is « le plancher »
une toilette (spelling), make doré agree
quand je serai (future because you’re not yet)
j’achèterai
I hope this helps you not only to complete your assignment but to learn something. Bonne chance.
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